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Click here to see the profile of this user 		Spring Has Turned Cold Again - 2007/04/22 22:17 This thread discusses the Content article: Spring Has Turned Cold Again

I really love this poem. I could relate to it because sometimes I feel like I lose myself too. Beautiful writing!
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Click here to see the profile of this user 		Re:Spring Has Turned Cold Again - 2007/07/03 23:50 try to work harder next time, because it's a little repetitive. every verse says the same thing and it's a little annoying. try to condense it, or... find some rhymes anyway, as a whole, it's a nice one
the ending's great!
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