My body aches as my head throbs from the constant reminders of uncertainty. As the tears well up in my eyes and slowly cascade down my now crimson cheeks. My chest trembles from the starvation of air as my lungs gasp for what they can gain. In between my hysteric cries I some how manage to mutter the word “Why”. The one word that begins every question I have for you.. Why does it hurt so bad to love you? Why don’t you love me? Why don’t you care? Why can’t you be more emotional? Why. But you never answer them so now I ask my self why. Why do I stay when I know there is no place in your heart for me?

 

I have two different versions of this and I m looking for some insight on them if anyone could help out this would be great. The one on top is the first one the one after this is the other one tell me which one you like and what I could do to improve it. Also if anyone could help with some ideas for a title.

 

My body aches as my head begins to throb from the endless thoughts of uncertainty that play like a never ending movie reel. The tears well up in my eyes and slowly cascade down my now crimson cheeks. My chest trembles from the starvation of air as my lungs gasp for what they can gain. In between my hysteric cries I manage to mutter the word “Why”. The one word that starts every question, aids in all of my insecurities and fuels my apprehensions about our relationship.

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