This is my first poem, So please tell me what you really think so I can do better in the future. Thanks!

Tears of Death:

Death is noted
Death is sad
Death is a wish
I wish I never had

Simple and broken
Yet complex and used
Tears of the past
and the tears to come

Days are limited
Days are short
Live life like you should
and be happy til death

No more cutting
No more tears
No more wishes
For I may fear

I can do it
I can try
For all that remains
I shall cry

By:  Benji Bear